20 December 2009

Critique Me: The Newer Business Card(s)


Sans information - Tommy yes, I should open myself up a little.
All periods - Easier no?
Picture as icon?
I still really like the Blake name font.

Let it all air out ... in the comments.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

i think either pic can work
my vote goes for the top most
be careful with the brushy typeface and legibility
will it be black and white?

Blake G. said...

Yeah, I've been getting the back-and-forth with the brushy, but in the end, I just kinda dig it.

Tommy said...

Nice work on applying feedback Blake! I don't mind the font....but I am wondering about the size...

did you try to print it yet and see how it looks at 3.5"? 9-10-11 would be good sizes to try for the sans (I like this font better)....I'm not sure about the name size...

I liked your stacked info better as a layout but I like the new treatment of bold email and number with dots.

I'd keep playing with your picture...i wouldn't have it intersect with anything on the card

I'm kind of liking it without the info of what you do...but at the same time it's a huge don't.....so I'm torn.

mGoBlake!